zwaples+clothing

(Rough copy)

zwaples do not have a very large wardrobe but they do have some clothes the male zwaples usually where a pair of under wear if its just another day at the office or they arent doing anything special. the females do the same thing except they wear a band or belt around there waste the reason they dont cover up as much of there body as we do is because they often overheat and they also live in a warm climate, wearing less clothes helps them cool off another reason is because cloth and clothing is very expensive on ertan. when they are going to go to a special event or a party it is a tradition for everbody but the host or party boy to cover up all there body with as much clothing as possible. hopfully the host will have AC. in the army they need to stay cool and also stay camofloged so instead of putting on heavy clothing and armour they use a high-tech paint that allows them to camoflage with there surrowndings it also has a chemical that colls the zwaples core tempature. unfortunally males are the only sex allowed to go to war not that there is more then 2 sex's. or is there? as you can see we are much more fortunate when it comes to clothing.

(good copy)

Zwaples do not have a very large wardrobe but they do have some clothes. The male Zwaples usually where a pair of under wear if it’s just another day at the office or they aren’t doing anything special. The females do the same thing except they wear a band or belt around their waist. The reason they don’t cover up as much of their body as we do is because they often overheat and they also live in a warm climate, wearing less clothes helps them cool off. Another reason is because cloth and clothing is very expensive on Ertan. When they are going to go to a special event or a party it is a tradition for everybody but the host or party boy/girl to cover up all their body with as much clothing as possible. Hopefully the host will have AC. In the army they need to stay cool and also stay camouflaged. So instead of wearing heavy clothing and armor they use a high-tech paint that allows them to camouflage with their surroundings. It also has a chemical that cools the Zwaples core temperature. Unfortunately males are the only sex allowed to go to war not that there is more than 2 sexes’. Or is there? As you can see we are much more fortunate when it comes to clothing.

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